Source: http://weblogs.baltimoresun.com/entertainment/news/kasperontap/2009/05/brew_at_the_zoo_review.html
I would add quotes from someone from the Maryland Zoo, and a more information on how the event came to be. There was only a couple quotes in the article. I would also add at least one quote from someone that attended the event. There was nothing in the article that said where the money or proceeds from the event went. There were also no pictures of the event, only a logo of the advertisement for the Brew in the Zoo. I think this would really add to the story and help publicize the event.
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